Re: [ALOCHONA] Re: This is my Freedom !!!

Kuwaiti Bongo Man - You are such a HE MAN........you should have joined the Army yourself/.

 

What are you & the Macho Cornel Shaheb going to do to "girlie men'; like us.

 

 

-----Original Message-----
From: ezajur
Sent: May 21, 2012 10:11 AM
To: alochona@yahoogroups.com
Subject: [ALOCHONA] Re: This is my Freedom !!!

 

Why are you looking for poetic quality first in a poem by a retired Lt Colonel? Should he have written something lilting and tilting like all the poems and songs that flood our country - poems and songs of irrelevant wishy washy crap that have nothing to do with anything?

It is far more important what he is trying to say. And what he is trying to say is not easy to say. But one can follow what he is trying to say. You can too. Which is why you criticise his style and not his content.

There are enough soppy poems and songs for you to enjoy all about bloody nil akaash, thumi kuthai, thumake kujthesi, thumake pachina - and similar bulls### themes that define the emasculated Bangladeshi male.

Bravo to the Colonel's sentiments about freedom in Bangladesh.

Dull bayonets used bluntly are needed in our language.

We have enough lily livered, namby pamby, wussy, effeminate bulls&&& for your pleasure. Just watch the next cultural program.

Ezajur Rahman

Kuwait 

 

--- In alochona@yahoogroups.com, Shah Deeldar <shahdeeldar@...> wrote:
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> Hardly, I see any poetic quality in this prose. Col Shaheb should try to sell something else than poetry. It is one of toughest domains of any literature!
> It feels like a dull bayonet has been used to write the lines. Next poem Sir!
> -SD
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> "All great truths begin as blasphemies." GBS
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> From: Shahadat Hussaini shahadathussaini@...
> To: bangladeshi googlesgroups bangladeshiamericans@googlegroups.com; khabor khabor@yahoogroups.com; alochona alochona@yahoogroups.com
> Sent: Wednesday, May 9, 2012 5:29 PM
> Subject: [ALOCHONA] This is my Freedom !!!
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> Poem: This is my Freedom !!! - Lt Col (Retd) Md Shahadat Hossain, psc    
>   This is my freedom!!!
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> I cannot talk in favor of Hartal (Strike), because people would color me as sympathizer of opposition party.
> I cannot talk against the Hartal (Strike), because people might treat me as likeminded of government party.
> This is my freedom!!!
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> I cannot carry little money alone, because miscreants might abduct or kill me only for that little money.
> I cannot walk or drive safely on any road, because any careless driver without license might hit or kill me on the spot.
> I cannot let my daughter go for education singly, because she might be subject to eve teasing.
> This is my freedom!!!
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> I cannot buy minimum food staff with my limited salary due to continuous market price hike.
> I cannot buy medicine for my sick relatives or children from my earning as I also got to pay bribe for the education of my child.
> This is my freedom!!!
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> I cannot talk about truth because my bosses and so called politicians would treat me threatened.
> I cannot talk about honesty because of too many dishonest people around and the dishonest environment.
> This is my freedom!!!
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> I cannot open my books or news papers due to unclear history of the past and present happenings,
> I cannot open my TV or Radio because of only “Talk Shows” even by not competent to speak on the topic.
> This is my freedom!!!
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> However, I have heroic bloods of sacrifice, though backdated of 1971, and a map named Bangladesh,
> However, I have a flag, red and green, which I host on important dates, named as Bangladeshi flag,
> However, I have a positive dream named “survival for the fittest and prosperous Bangladesh”, preserved within me.
> And this is my only freedom of dream!!!
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> (The poet Lieutenant Colonel, retired, Md Shahadat Hossain, psc is a freelance poet and writer related to the promotion of Bangladesh who can be reached at shahadatb@... )
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